Thursday, August 13, 2009

Chapter 3



Will: That was fucked up… I need cigarettes…

Will walks outside to where his car should be…

(Scenery palms trees and sandy beaches)

Will: What the fuck?

Will getting a bit use to the ridiculousness of his situation

Will: Hey sir (To a passerby) Where is the nearest 7-11?

Random guy: A mile up the road is a Hess Mart

Will: Great, thanks

Thinking I am dying for a cigarette

Will heads back into the house that eerily seems like the house he has lived in for the last 3 years and find keys to a Bentley

Will: OK, I'll go with these….

Hits the garage and jumps in the Bentley on the way to the Hess Mart a mile up the road

Will: Well, this seems about wrong

Car pulls up next to Will

Eddie: Where you headed, son?

Will: Yo Ed, what the fuck? The Hess mart…..?

Eddie: Aiight, see you up there…

Will and Ed pull into the Hess Mart

Eddie: Who we got lined up tonight?

Weill: On what?

Eddie: This 8 B we need to drop

Will: Dude, let me get my bearings… I just got up and if this is Florida, I am actually in another world… So I need a minute, an hour, or a lifetime…. So, just chill

Eddie: No doubt, I feel you… …. YO, lookout nigga…

Gunshots ring through the windows of the Hess mart

Will: What the fuck was that?

Eddie: Yo, that was Hector and those assholes… They think your infiltrating…

Will: On what?

Eddie: Will, they have been selling here 3 years before we got here…

Will: Alright, I get it… Dude, I am done with selling…. I am officially retired. Go to Hector and tell him he's got it.

Eddie: What?

Will: On the real, I have no reason for this shit anymore… I do not need to be shot at…

Eddie: Oh shit, what's up over there?

Will and Eddie approach a bleeding girl with two people surrounding her

Will: What happened?

Random guy: She got hit with a bullet!

Will: Call an ambulance!!

Station attendant: Just called, they are on the way

Will, random guy, Eddie etc… wait for ambulance holding napkins over girls wound to shoulder

Ambulance pulls up

Will: This girl has been shot... She needs a hospital

Ambulance driver: OK, let get her in….

Will jumps in ambulance with girl, who happens to be Hispanic

Ambulance driver: Are you related to this woman?

Will: No, I just watched her get shot…

Ambulance driver: You should leave, sir…

Will: No, is she going to be ok?

Ambulance driver performing CPR

Ambulance driver: I am not sure, but if you are not next of kin you should not be here

Will: What do you mean? Is she going to die? Please don't tell me this….

Heart monitor goes flat line……

Will: Is she dead, bro?

Ambulance driver: Calling it, 12:05 PM

Will: No fucking way… Why did you stop to ask me these fucking questions? She could have been at the hospital already

Ambulance driver: She would not have made anyway, sir…

Will jumps out ambulance and starts talking to random guy

Will: Do you know this girl?

Random guy: Yes, she live only a mile from here

Will: How old was she?

Random guy: Was?

Will: Yes, she died… Where do her mom and dad live?

Random guy: Up a mile…..

Will: Fuck me… This cannot be happening…

Eddie: YO Will, we need to bounce bro

Will: Fuck that… Where the fuck does Hector chill?

Eddie: Near Pine Oaks…

Will: That's where we are going… Do you have any weapons at all?

Eddie: Fully strapped, son

Will: Dude, please don't ever say "Fully Strapped" again… I almost threw up… So you have a gun right?

Eddie: Yeah

Will: OK, let's go to Oaks Pine place

Eddie: Pine oaks…

Will: Whatever dick, let's go!

Will: Give me that shit

Eddie: Glock or…

Interrupts

Will: Glock

Will and Eddie head up to Hector's place at Pine oaks where a bunch of people are hanging out drinking beers and laughing

Will jumps out the car

Will: Where the fuck is Hector?

Three guys stand up

Will: If there are three Hectors here I am popping each one of them

Three guys jet in two directions, Will follows the lone direction

Will: Slow down motherfucker, you just killed a kid, you're deserving of what is coming

Will chases firing shot after shot and finally clipping his target in the arm

Will: Fucking tough guy right? Firing on an unsuspecting man and killing a little girl who had nothing to do with any beef you had with me..? How does this feel? Are you hurting? Will fires three shots at suspected killers face.

Eddie running up behind Will

Eddie: Dude, what the fuck?

Will: What, this is the guy, no?

Eddie: I have no idea who this is… It's not Hector…

Will: Wait, what?

Eddie: What did you do bro?

Will: Fuck this, where did the other two go?

Eddie: I have no idea, I am out bro

Will: Fuck that, someone needs to pay for this girl's death… Shit, isn't right

Police: Freeze, put the gun down

A woman and 2 children crying behind the two park police cars

Will: Sir, this guy shot and killed an unarmed little girl at a gas station a mile from here….

Woman: that's my husband! He just got back from work, please let him be…

Child: Is my Daddy OK?

Will: Wait! WAIT! What's his name? What's his fucking name?

Police: FREEZE!

Will: (Towards woman) what's his fucking name?!>?

Woman: Ignacio, Ignacio Isturis!

Will staggering and bewildered with gun in hand…... I

Will: I fucked up…. I'm so sorry... (Staring at woman and child) I am so sorry…..

Will points gun up in air and fires… Police unload shots into Will


 

(((Alarm clock on cell phone sounds)))

(((Alarm clock on cell phone sounds)))

(((Alarm clock on cell phone sounds)))


 

Will: Shut the fuck up…..

Presses snooze

(((Alarm clock on cell phone sounds)))

Will awakes in room, looking to his left with a woman tucked under his right arm

Will: What is this Quantum Fucking Leap?


 

There are sides to every story… Not two, sometimes three or four… This one had multiple sides. Will chose the wrong side again. When realizing he was on the side of evil he tried to make good if it… He could not have made it worse. Instead of avenging a death, he created more death and more despair. He took a father from his family and failed to find justice for a mother and father who live with the death of a loved one… He did not only meet his demise, his actions sent a young girl and a loving father to their demise

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